Re: [Gen-art] [dhcwg] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-pd-relay-requirements-04
Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Thu, 17 December 2020 02:37 UTC
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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [dhcwg] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-pd-relay-requirements-04
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Roni, thanks for your review. Ian, thanks for your response. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Dec 14, 2020, at 11:45 AM, ianfarrer@gmx.com wrote: > > HI Ron, > > Thanks for the review and comments. Please see inline below. > > Ian > >> On 12. Dec 2020, at 16:44, Roni Even via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote: >> >> Reviewer: Roni Even >> Review result: Ready with Nits >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just >> like any other last call comments. >> >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> >> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-pd-relay-requirements-?? >> Reviewer: Roni Even >> Review Date: 2020-12-12 >> IETF LC End Date: 2020-12-14 >> IESG Telechat date: 2020-12-17 >> >> Summary: The document is ready for publication with nits as a standard track RFC >> >> Major issues: >> >> Minor issues: >> >> Nits/editorial comments: >> 1. first sentence in section 3.5 "If the client loses information about a >> prefix that it is delegated ..." not clear "it is” > > [if - Suggested reword: > > If the client loses information about an an active prefix lease it has been delegated... > > ] > >> 2. section 7 "This document >> does not add any new security considerations beyond those mentioned in Section >> 22 of [RFC8213]." RFC8213 does not have section 22 , did you mean of RFC8415? > > [if - RFC8213 is correct. The draft has been updated just to reference RFC8213, rather than > any specific section as the whole document is relevant.] > >> >> 3. In section 7 are there any security requirements for the operational >> interface requirements from section 4.4? > > [if - Good point. How about adding a reference recommending that RFC4778 (Current Operational Security Practices in > Internet Service Provider Environments) is implemented?] > >> >> >> >> _______________________________________________ >> dhcwg mailing list >> dhcwg@ietf.org >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dhcwg > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
- [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-d… Roni Even via Datatracker
- Re: [Gen-art] [dhcwg] Genart last call review of … ianfarrer
- Re: [Gen-art] [dhcwg] Genart last call review of … Alissa Cooper