[Gen-art] Re: [Suit] draft-ietf-suit-update-management-10 ietf last call Genart review

[Ron Even <[e-mail]>]

HI,
I reviewed revision 12 and find my issue resolved

Roni Even

On Thu, 11 Jun 2026 at 12:47 Brendan Moran <[e-mail]> wrote:

> Hi Roni,
>
>
> Thank you for your GENART review of draft-ietf-suit-update-management.
>
>
> You noted that the term “primary-cell” in Section 5.3 was unfamiliar and
> suggested adding it to the terminology section.
>
>
> We reviewed this comment during preparation of the latest revision (-12)
> and updated the document accordingly.
>
>
> Could you please confirm whether you consider the issue resolved in the
> current version, or whether there are any remaining concerns that should be
> addressed before publication?
>
>
> Thank you again for the review and helpful feedback.
>
>
> Regards,
>
>
> Brendan Moran
>
>
> *From: *Roni Even via Datatracker <[e-mail]>
> *Date: *Saturday, 20 December 2025 at 11:27
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> *Subject: *[Suit] draft-ietf-suit-update-management-10 ietf last call
> Genart review
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> Document: draft-ietf-suit-update-management
> Title: Update Management Extensions for Software Updates for Internet of
> Things
> (SUIT) Manifests Reviewer: Roni Even Review result: Ready with Nits
>
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> Document: draft-ietf-suit-update-management-??
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date: 2025-12-20
> IETF LC End Date: 2026-01-02
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>
> Summary:
> The document is ready for publication as standard track RFC with nit
>
> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
> In section 5.3 there is a term primary-cell which I am unfamiliar with.
> Can you
> add it to the terminology section
>
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