[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-hardie-dispatch-rfc3405-update-03

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Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review result: Ready

Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-hardie-dispatch-rfc3405-update-03

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Document: draft-hardie-dispatch-rfc3405-update-03
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2020-09-01
IETF LC End Date: 2020-09-24
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Summary: Ready (with micro-nit)
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Nits:
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> 1.  Introduction
>
>    Part five of the Dynamic Delegation Discovery System (DDDS), RFC 3405
>    [RFC3405], describes the registration procedures for assignments in
>    URI.ARPA.  The document requires that registrations be in the "IETF
>    tree" of URI registrations.  The use of URI scheme name trees was
>    defined in RFC 2717 [RFC2717] but discontinued by RFC 4395 [RFC4395].
>    Since the use of trees was discontinued, there is no way in the
>    current process set out in BCP 35 [RFC7595] to meet the requirement.

This is indeed a nit, but I'd prefer s/the requirement/the above requirement/.
The current text did make me briefly think "Which requirement?".