[Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-rrdp-desynchronization-01
Job Snijders <job@fastly.com> Tue, 13 August 2024 09:04 UTC
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Date: Tue, 13 Aug 2024 11:04:40 +0200
From: Job Snijders <job@fastly.com>
To: Behcet Sarikaya <sarikaya@ieee.org>
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On Mon, Aug 12, 2024 at 10:00:16AM -0700, Behcet Sarikaya via Datatracker wrote: > Nits/editorial comments: > The document is short, well-written but has a few nits. > in section 3.1 it says > Using its previously recorded state (Section 3.1) > > I don't understand (Section 3.1) here, it is already in Section 3.1. I figured it out, wrapping the <sourcecode> target in a <figure> container improved readability, see the newly posted -02 draft for the change: https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-sidrops-rrdp-desynchronization-01&url2=draft-ietf-sidrops-rrdp-desynchronization-02&difftype=--html Kind regards, Job
- [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-s… Behcet Sarikaya via Datatracker
- [Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ie… Job Snijders
- [Gen-art] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ie… Job Snijders