Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-drip-arch-22

["Stuart W. Card" <[e-mail]>]

Thanks for the review! I was asked to respond to your question. I agree 
that GEN-7 and GEN-10 may be conspicuous by their absence from the 
architecture document.

In the initial context of Broadcast RID, GEN-7 (QoS) is a requirement 
primarily on implementations of UAS RID senders that requires no 
explicit architectural support. For example: CAAs may require a minimum 
rate at which RID information is refreshed; in any sender implementation 
intended for use in multiple jurisdictions (or on multiple classes of 
aircraft) with different rate requirements, this would thus need to be a 
configurable parameter; however it need not be remotely configurable, 
thus there is no need to specify a protocol or language for 
getting/setting the parameter value. As Network RID matures, GEN-7 may 
assume broader significance, but we don't want to embed any guesses as 
to that in the current architectural overview. GEN-10 (multicast) is 
even more Network RID specific, so likewise to be addressed in future 
DRIP documents.

Do you feel that the above information should be reflected explicitly in 
the architecture document?

On 4/5/2022 4:07 AM, Roni Even via Datatracker wrote:
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review result: Ready
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-drip-arch-??
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date: 2022-04-05
> IETF LC End Date: 2022-04-06
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
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> Summary:
> The document is ready for publication as an informational RFC
>
> One question: I noticed that the document relates to RFC9153 requirements. I
> did not see gen-7 and gen-10 addressed .   Gen-7 QoS: DRIP MUST enable
> policy-based specification of performance and reliability parameters.
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> Major issues:
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