Re: [Gen-art] [Curdle] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-curdle-ssh-kex-sha2-14

"Mark D. Baushke" <mdb@juniper.net> Mon, 15 February 2021 21:22 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [Curdle] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-curdle-ssh-kex-sha2-14
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Ron Frederick <ronf@timeheart.net> writes:

> Hi Mark,
> 
> On Feb 15, 2021, at 1:06 PM, Mark D. Baushke <mdb@juniper.net> wrote:
> > Ron Frederick <ronf@timeheart.net> writes:
> >> On Feb 15, 2021, at 10:54 AM, Mark D. Baushke <mdb=40juniper.net@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
> >>> Suggestion to the reviewer of replacement paragraphs before the table in
> >>> section 4 "Summary Guidance for Key Exchange Method Names Implementations"
> >>>
> >>>    [snip]
> >>>   It is suggested that the MUST NOT key exchange method code be
> >>>   removed from the any implementations using them.
> >>
> >> This should be “from any” instead of “from the any”.
> >
> > Hmmm... I seem to have managed to lose what I intended to write. I will
> > suggest this as a replacement:
> >
> >    It is suggested that the code which implements a "MUST NOT" key
> >    exchange method have that implementation code be removed.
> 
> There’s some redundancy with “code” here twice, and “have..be” still doesn’t read right. I’d suggest:
> 
>    It is suggested that the code which implements a "MUST NOT" key
>    exchange method be removed from implementations that contain it.

+1 I like it. Thank you!

> > Thank you very much for your review of the text I wrote.
> 
> 
> No problem!
> --
> Ron Frederick
> ronf@timeheart.net

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	-- Mark