Re: [Gen-art] [OPSAWG] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-opsawg-hmac-sha-2-usm-snmp-05

Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Tue, 28 April 2015 11:34 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [OPSAWG] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-opsawg-hmac-sha-2-usm-snmp-05
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Looks ok to me.

Regards,

Christer

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From: Johannes Merkle [mailto:johannes.merkle@secunet.com] 
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To: Christer Holmberg; t.petch; gen-art@ietf.org
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Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-opsawg-hmac-sha-2-usm-snmp-05

another suggestion:

I'd linke to change the title from

 HMAC-SHA-2 Authentication Protocols in USM for SNMP

to

 HMAC-SHA-2 Authentication Protocols in USM for SNMPv3
                                                    ^^ Do you agree?


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Johannes