[Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-hardy-pdf-mime-02

Dan Romascanu <dromasca@gmail.com> Wed, 31 August 2016 06:54 UTC

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Document: draft-hardy-pdf-mime-02

Reviewer: Dan Romascanu

Review Date: 07/07/16

IETF LC End Date: 07/21/16

IESG Telechat date:9/1/16



Summary: Ready.



This informational document which obsoletes RFC 3778 provides an overview
of the PDF format and updates the media type registration of
“application/pdf” by aligning it with RFC 6838. I am no expert in
application formats, but the document seems to be well informed and clearly
written. A couple of nits generate id-nits warnings (updating RFC 3778 is
not mentioned in the Abstract, one unused reference) that can be easily
fixed during the RFC Editor processing.



Major issues:



Minor issues:



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