[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-msd-20

Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> Fri, 14 September 2018 17:59 UTC

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From: Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu>
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-msd-20
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area 
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Document: draft-ietf-ospf-segment-routing-msd-20
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2018-09-14
IETF LC End Date: 2018-08-29
IESG Telechat date: 2018-09-25

Summary:

This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should 
be fixed before publication.

Issues:

Major: 0
Minor: 0
Nits:  1

1) NIT:

IdNits reports:

   == Outdated reference: A later version (-15) exists of
      draft-ietf-isis-segment-routing-msd-13

We discussed this earlier during last call review and you indicated that 
it must be a tooling issue because your document source doesn't 
reference a particular version of this document. If so you can leave 
this to be fixed by the editor during publication.

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