[Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-sipclf-problem-statement-09

"Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Sun, 11 December 2011 04:40 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-sipclf-problem-statement-09
  The Common Log Format (CLF) for the Session Initiation Protocol (SIP):
                         Framework and Data Model
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 10-Dec-2011
IETF LC End Date: 20-December-2011
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC

Major issues:

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