[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-curdle-pkix-06.txt

Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Mon, 09 October 2017 13:33 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-curdle-pkix-06.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20171002
IETF LC End Date: 20171009
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: 
 - ToC page 2 and 11 page 14: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments

 - 2 page 3: there is now a RFC updating 2119 to solve the lower case
  keyword issue. I don't know if there is a policy about this, e.g.,
  improving the standard 2119 reference text. I'll ask to the gen-art.

 - 3 page 4: "a small number of implementations may still require"
  for instance of (not ambiguous) use of a 2119 keyword in lower case
  (so now a priori in its English language meaning).

Regards

Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr

PS: BTW I know this draft before being assigned as its gen-art reviewer,
I even pulled a request to define these OIDs in Botan...
So thanks to have done that!