[Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5764-mux-fixes-10

"Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Thu, 28 July 2016 23:19 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-avtcore-rfc5764-mux-fixes-10
     Multiplexing Scheme Updates for Secure Real-time Transport Protocol
         (SRTP) Extension for Datagram Transport Layer Security (DTLS)
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 28-July-2016
IETF LC End Date: 2016-08-06
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.

Major issues:

Minor issues:
     Is there any way to get clearance from pre-2008 authors to enable 
current copyright text to be used even though old text is copied into 
this document for clarity?

Nits/editorial comments: