[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ohai-svcb-config-05

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Reviewer: Thomas Fossati
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-ohai-svcb-config-??
Reviewer: Thomas Fossati
Review Date: 2023-08-15
IETF LC End Date: 2023-08-21
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

This document describes:
* how a server can advertise through DNS that it offers Oblivious HTTP
* how a client can learn the URI to use for the gateway using a well-known URI
* how the gateway's key configuration can be fetched via the well-known URI

The document is very clearly written with good examples at the right places.

Applicability and security considerations are thorough.

The IANA section looks good.

Major issues: none

Minor issues: none

Nits/editorial comments: just a couple, which I packed in a PR.