[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ohai-svcb-config-05
Thomas Fossati via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 15 August 2023 07:22 UTC
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Reviewer: Thomas Fossati Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-ohai-svcb-config-?? Reviewer: Thomas Fossati Review Date: 2023-08-15 IETF LC End Date: 2023-08-21 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This document describes: * how a server can advertise through DNS that it offers Oblivious HTTP * how a client can learn the URI to use for the gateway using a well-known URI * how the gateway's key configuration can be fetched via the well-known URI The document is very clearly written with good examples at the right places. Applicability and security considerations are thorough. The IANA section looks good. Major issues: none Minor issues: none Nits/editorial comments: just a couple, which I packed in a PR.
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