[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dtn-ipn-update-11

[Russ Housley via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review result: Not Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-dtn-ipn-update-11
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2024-06-12
IETF LC End Date: Already complete
IESG Telechat date: 2024-06-20


Summary: Not Ready


Major Concerns:

RFC 7116 is an Informational RFC, and this document, if approved, will
be published an an RFC on the standards track.  It is very unusual for
a standards-track RFC to update an Informational RFC.  I suggest that
this document and a companion document ought to obsolete RFC 7116, where
the companion document separately handles all of the non-ipn topics in
RFC 7116.  The companion document can be an informational RFC.


Minor Concerns:

None


Nits:

Section 5.5: s/security source EID for/security source for/