Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-grow-wkc-behavior-03

Randy Bush <randy@psg.com> Sat, 04 May 2019 06:18 UTC

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> In both the Abstract and the 2nd paragraph of the Introduction,
> it might be helpful to add something like:
>   This document recommends specific action items to limit future inconsistency.

thanks.  done but not (yet) published.

randy