Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-clarify-03

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Tue, 31 July 2018 02:09 UTC

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On 31/07/2018 13:35, Randy Bush wrote:
> thanks for review!
> 
>> Title would be more searchworthy if it read "BGP-4 Origin Validation Clarifications"
> 
> ok.  how about "BGP-4 RPKI-Based Origin Validation Clarifications?"

Sure

   Brian

> 
>> Abstract:  s/\"/./
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> whoopsie.
> 
> will keep new xml in in emacs buffer until all reviews are in
> 
> randy
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