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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dice-profile-14

"FOSSATI, Thomas (Thomas)" <thomas.fossati@alcatel-lucent.com> Thu, 10 September 2015 06:23 UTC

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From: "FOSSATI, Thomas (Thomas)" <thomas.fossati@alcatel-lucent.com>
To: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>, "draft-ietf-dice-profile.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-dice-profile.all@ietf.org>, General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>
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On 09/09/2015 21:14, "Brian E Carpenter" <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
wrote:
>On 09/09/2015 20:07, FOSSATI, Thomas (Thomas) wrote:
>> Hi Brian,
>> 
>> On 02/09/2015 00:30, "Brian E Carpenter"
>><brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com<mailto:brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>> wrote:
>> Minor Issues:
>> -------------
>> 
>> "  Figure 7 shows an example interaction... The IPv6
>>    multicast address used for site-local discovery is FF02::FD."
>> 
>> Where does ff02::fd come from? Is it just used as an example? That
>>isn't clear
>> in the text. (IANA lists it as "variable scope allocation".)
>> 
>> FF02::FD is the link-local "all CoAP Nodes" (see
>>https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7252#section-12.8 and
>>http://www.iana.org/assignments/ipv6-multicast-addresses/ipv6-multicast-a
>>ddresses.xhtml).
>
>Oh. I find the registry very confusing. It would help ignorant people like
>me if the sentence read
>
>"The IPv6 multicast address used for CoAP site-local discovery is
>FF02::FD."
>
>except that there *is* a bug in that sentence: ff02:: is the link-local
>range,
>site-local would be ff05::fd. So it should be
>
>"The IPv6 multicast address used for CoAP link-local discovery is
>FF02::FD."

Fixed, thanks.

Cheers, t

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