[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-02

[Dan Romascanu via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review result: Ready with Issues

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Document: draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-02
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review Date: 2021-02-04
IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-08
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

This Document is Ready with one issue that I would suggest to clarify and
possibly apply edits before approval.

Major issues:

If my understanding is correct this document together with 7483bis will replace
RFC 7482 and RFC 7483 and advance them to Internet Standard. Sections 7 and 8
will be taken out from the final published RFC. I believe that the relationship
with RFC 7482 needs to be detailed either in the Introduction or in a dedicated
version, in order to clarify for future readers and users the status of the 2 /
4 documents. I also believe that a shortened version of the 'Changes from RFC
7482' section now an Appendix should be included in the text of the document in
its final form.

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: