[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch-25

Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Tue, 16 October 2018 07:44 UTC

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Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-netconf-zerotouch-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2018-10-16
IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-22
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: The document is ready for publication as Standard Track RFC

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: 

1. In the editorial note the change log is in appendix D and not A