[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-extra-imap-fetch-preview-09

Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 15 September 2020 20:52 UTC

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Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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Document: draft-ietf-extra-imap-fetch-preview-09
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2020-09-15
IETF LC End Date: 2020-09-14
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have
some comments.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: In Section 4.2, it would have been good to give some
example and advice on when the client uses the preview to take some action. Is
this to be avoided? (Was not very clear to me).

Best Regards,
Meral Shirazipour
www.ericsson.com