Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis-08

Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> Wed, 10 April 2019 19:32 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis-08
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On 4/10/19 1:23 PM, Joseph Lorenzo Hall wrote:
> Thanks much for your review... responses inline:
> 
> On Wed, Mar 13, 2019 at 5:01 PM Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu 
> <mailto:pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu>> wrote:
> 
>     I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
>     Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the
>     IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any
>     other
>     last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at
>     <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> 
>     Document: draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis-08
>     Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
>     Review Date: 2019-03-13
>     IETF LC End Date: 2019-03-18
>     IESG Telechat date: ?
> 
>     Summary:
> 
>     This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should
>     be fixed before publication.
> 
>     Issues:
> 
>     Major: 0
>     Minor: 1
>     Nits:  3
> 
> 
> I only see three nits below... did the minor one get lost?

My mistake. No Minor issues.

	Thanks,
	Paul