Re: [Gen-art] [MMUSIC] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-sip-sdp-36

Roman Shpount <roman@telurix.com> Tue, 06 August 2019 20:30 UTC

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Date: Tue, 06 Aug 2019 16:29:45 -0400
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [MMUSIC] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-sip-sdp-36
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Stewart and Alissa,

I have reviewed Chister's response for this issue and re-read RFC4091/4092,
and now agree with Christer: We can remove the section about ANAT and
references to RFC4091/4092.

Best Regards,
_____________
Roman Shpount


On Tue, Aug 6, 2019 at 12:52 PM Roman Shpount <roman@telurix.com> wrote:

> Stewart and Alissa,
>
> Thank you for the review. The references for RFC 4091 and RFC 4092 are
> intentional and describe relationship with previous obsoleted
> implementations. There are still deployed implementations of  RFC 4091 and
> RFC 4092 and ice-sip-sdp states that ICE implementations should be
> preferred over legacy implementations of  RFC 4091 and RFC 4092.
>
> Best Regards,
> _____________
> Roman Shpount
>
>
> On Tue, Aug 6, 2019 at 12:00 PM Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote:
>
>> Stewart, thanks for your review. I entered a DISCUSS ballot to check on
>> the obsoleted references to RFC 4091 and RFC 4092.
>>
>> Alissa
>>
>> > On Jun 17, 2019, at 6:05 AM, Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <
>> noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
>> >
>> > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
>> > Review result: Ready with Nits
>> >
>> > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
>> > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
>> > by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
>> > like any other last call comments.
>> >
>> > For more information, please see the FAQ at
>> >
>> > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>> >
>> > Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-sip-sdp-36
>> > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
>> > Review Date: 2019-06-17
>> > IETF LC End Date: 2019-06-20
>> > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
>> >
>> > Summary: This is very much a review by a non-specialist. The document
>> is well
>> > written, but has a small number of nits that need looking at before
>> publication.
>> >
>> > Major issues: None
>> >
>> > Minor issues: None
>> >
>> > Nits/editorial comments:
>> >
>> > ID-Nits points out the following:
>> >  -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 4091
>> >     (Obsoleted by RFC 5245)
>> >  -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 4092
>> >     (Obsoleted by RFC 5245)
>> >> From the text it looks like the updated RFC should be the reference
>> that this
>> > memo uses.
>> >
>> > ====
>> > The following abbreviations are not in the RFC Editor's well known list
>> and
>> > should be expanded on first use:
>> >    STUN
>> >    SDP
>> >    FQDN
>> >    PSTN
>> >
>> >
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