Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of RFC2818

Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com> Fri, 08 June 2012 18:25 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of RFC2818
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On 8 June 2012 00:33, Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> wrote:
> Please see attached review. I haven't cc'ed the IETF or IESG since
> my comment is only a process issue, but this can be forwarded as you
> think fit. If the IESG can see a way round it consistent with RFC 2026,
> that would be fine by me.

The "Updates" in RFC 5785 is an error, as noted in an erratum on that document.