[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-campbell-art-rfc5727-update-02
"Vijay K. Gurbani" <vkg@bell-labs.com> Fri, 26 February 2016 20:43 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-campbell-art-rfc5727-update-02
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-campbell-art-rfc5727-update-02 Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: Feb-26-2016 IETF LC End Date: Not known IESG Telechat date: Not known This document is ready as a BCP, however, it does have 1 Minor issue that I detail below. Major: 0 Minor: 1 Nits: 0 Minor: - S1, "Other RAI working groups develop extensions to SIP that do not change the core protocol, new applications of SIP, and other technologies for interactive communication among humans." Are we intentionally limiting interactive communications only to "humans"? I would suspect that this would be limiting, no? A bunch of SIP SUBS/NOTs happen between automaton, or machines. Surely we don't want to exclude these in the future. My suggestion would be to simply take out the phrase "among humans". Thanks, - vijay -- Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Nokia Networks 1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60563 (USA) Email: vkg@{bell-labs.com,acm.org} / vijay.gurbani@nokia.com Web: http://ect.bell-labs.com/who/vkg/ | Calendar: http://goo.gl/x3Ogq
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-campbell-art-rf… Vijay K. Gurbani
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-campbell-ar… Ben Campbell
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-campbell-ar… Vijay K. Gurbani
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-campbell-ar… Ben Campbell
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-campbell-ar… Vijay K. Gurbani