Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-18

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 15 May 2019 15:28 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-18
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Joel, thanks for your review. Ketan, thanks for your response. I entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa


> On Apr 8, 2019, at 2:06 AM, Ketan Talaulikar (ketant) <ketant@cisco.com>; wrote:
> 
> Hi Joel,
> 
> Thanks for your review. I've taken note of the nit that you pointed out (it was also pointed by Alvaro on his review of v18). I have it in my edit buffer and will include in the next update.
> 
> Thanks,
> Ketan
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> Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-18
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> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review result: Ready
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-segment-routing-epe-18
> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review Date: 2019-04-06
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-04-17
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC.
> 
> Major issues: N/A
> 
> Minor issues: N/A
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: 
>    Section 3 begins "his section".  I expect that should be "This section".
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