[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-ocsp-nonce-03

[Francesca Palombini via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Francesca Palombini
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-lamps-ocsp-nonce-03
Reviewer: Francesca Palombini
Review Date: 2020-09-02
IETF LC End Date: 2020-09-02
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that
should be fixed before publication.

Major issues: -

Minor issues: -

Nits/editorial comments:

Section 1:
OLD:
This extension was
   previously defined in section 4.1.1 of [RFC6960]
NEW:
This extension was
   previously defined in section 4.4.1 of [RFC6960]

Section 2:
The message format for the OCSP request and response is defined in
   the [RFC6960].  It also defines the standard extensions for OCSP
   messages based on the extension model employed in X.509 version 3
   certificates (see [RFC5280]).

"It" in the second sentence is ambiguous, I think it would be better to replace
with "[RFC6960]".