[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dots-requirements-18

[Robert Sparks <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review result: Ready with Issues

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Document: draft-ietf-dots-requirements-18
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 2019-02-13
IETF LC End Date: 2018-11-23
IESG Telechat date: 2019-02-21

Summary: Ready, but with a process issue for the shepherd and AD to consider.

This version addressed all of my comments on version -16. Thank you.

However, the diff shows that a large number of SHOULDs were changed to MUSTs.
I'm guessing that was in response to a comment in the TSVART review of -16.
This large scale substitution makes me worry - are they really the right
adjustments? Has the group reviewed and agreed to these normative changes?

As a nit, I'll note that the additional description of heartbeating creeps into
specifying protocol rather than requirements.