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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-11

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Thu, 05 March 2015 13:56 UTC

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Thanks for your review, Alexey!

On 11 Feb 2015, at 13:55, Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> wrote:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.
> 
> Document:  draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-11
> Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
> Review Date: 2015-02-11
> IETF LC End Date: 2015-02-04
> IESG Telechat date: 2015-03-05
> 
> Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.
> 
> Thank you for writing this document, I quite enjoyed reading it.
> 
> Major issues:
> Minor issues:
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> In A.1:
> 
> >LISP, as initially conceived, had a number of potential operating modes, named ’models’. Although they are note
> Typo: not
> >used anymore, one occasionally sees mention of them, so they are briefly described here.
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