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Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com> Wed, 21 October 2015 04:10 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Document: draft-ietf-netconf-call-home-11.txt
Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
Review Date: 2015/10/20
IESG Telechat date: 2015/10/22

Summary: The draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard but I do 
have a comment that you may wish to address.

Minor
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* Section 3.1 S3: The server cannot immediately start the SSH server protocol 
without waiting for SSH connection initiation from the SSH client, right? If 
yes, shouldn't there be an additional condition here?

Thanks
Suresh

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