Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-pal-eidr-urn-2016-01

Pierre-Anthony Lemieux <pal@sandflow.com> Sat, 02 July 2016 20:30 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-pal-eidr-urn-2016-01
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Hi Vijay,

I appreciate the review and comment.

> That is, are the schemes (urn, eidr) part of the case-insensitive string match?

Yes, it looks like

"Lexical equivalence of EIDR-URN is defined by case-insensitive string match."

should say

"Lexical equivalence of URN-EIDR is defined by case-insensitive string match."

This would confirm that the entire URN-EIDR string defined in
"Declaration of syntactic structure" is considered for matching,
including "urn:eidr:".

In fact, it looks like all instances of "EIDR-URN" should be replaced
by "URN-EIDR" [ed.: this was missed in the original publication].

Does this make sense?

Best,

-- Pierre

On Thu, Jun 9, 2016 at 3:01 PM, Vijay K. Gurbani <vkg@bell-labs.com> wrote:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
>
> Document: draft-pal-eidr-urn-2016-01
> Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
> Review Date: Jun-09-2016
> IETF LC End Date: Jul-01-2016
> IESG Telechat date: Jun-30-2016
>
> This document is ready as an Informational.
>
> Major: 0
> Minor: 1
> Nits: 0
>
> Minor:
>
> - S2, Rules for Lexical Equivalence.  I think some more guidance should
>  be provided here.  Specifically, are the following two EIDRs the same?
>
>   urn:eidr:10.5240:7791-8534-2C23-9030-8610-5
>   10.5240:7791-8534-2C23-9030-8610-5
>
>  That is, are the schemes (urn, eidr) part of the case-insensitive
>  string match?
>
> Thanks,
>
> - vijay
> --
> Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Nokia Networks
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