[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-bfd-yang-14

Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Fri, 08 June 2018 06:30 UTC

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From: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-bfd-yang-14
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2018-06-07
IETF LC End Date: 2018-06-08
IESG Telechat date: NA


Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:


Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
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