Re: [Gen-art] [mpls] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-rsvp-shared-labels-06

Vishnu Pavan Beeram <vishnupavan@gmail.com> Mon, 10 December 2018 05:57 UTC

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Date: Mon, 10 Dec 2018 00:57:16 -0500
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [mpls] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-mpls-rsvp-shared-labels-06
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Russ, Hi!

Much Thanks for the review! We just posted a new rev (-07) to address your
comments. Please do go through the diffs (
https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mpls-rsvp-shared-labels-07.txt)
and let us know if the new version adequately addresses your concern.

The term "loose hop" was introduced in RFC3209. So we just added a
reference to it in the relevant sentence.

Regards,
-Pavan (on behalf of the authors)

On Fri, Nov 30, 2018 at 1:29 PM Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>; wrote:

> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> Review result: Ready
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-mpls-rsvp-shared-labels-06
> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> Review Date: 2018-11-30
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-12-11
> IESG Telechat date: unknown
>
> Summary: Ready
>
>
> Major Concerns:
>
> None
>
>
> Minor Concerns:
>
> Section 5.3: To understand this section, I had to learn about "loose
> hops" from other sources.  Please consider adding this term to the ones
> that are defined in Section 2.
>
>
> Nits:
>
> Throughout document: s/hop by hop/hop-by-hop/
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> Section 5.3.1: s/The net result is that by/As a result, by/
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