[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-uta-xmpp-06
"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Fri, 17 April 2015 07:13 UTC
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-uta-xmpp-06 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2015-4-17 IETF LC End Date: 2015-4-13 IESG Telechat date: 2015-4-23 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Standard Track RFC. I reviewed the latest version and it addresses my comments on the 05 version Major issues: Minor issues: