Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-farrell-decade-ni-07/08.txt

Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> Mon, 09 July 2012 14:08 UTC

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Thanks Francis,

Fixed in working copy [1] other than #authors.

Cheers,
S.

[1] http://down.dsg.cs.tcd.ie/misc/draft-farrell-decade-ni.txt

On 07/09/2012 02:15 PM, Francis Dupont wrote:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> 
> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> .
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive.
> 
> Document: draft-farrell-decade-ni-07/08.txt
> Reviewer: Francis Dupont
> Review Date: 20120704
> IETF LC End Date: 20120702
> IESG Telechat date: unknown
> 
> Summary: Ready
> 
> Major issues: there were some issues raised in the mailing list but
> solved (?) in the last version (I reviewed an intermediate 07-08 version,
> last is 09 today).
> 
> Minor issues: (not technical) more than 5 authors
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
>  - Toc and 11 page 18: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments
>   (i.e., American English vs. GB one)
> 
>  - 1 page 4, 3 page 8, 9.4 page 15: e.g. -> e.g.,
> 
>  - 4 page 9, 7 page 11: i.e. -> i.e.,
> 
> Regards
> 
> Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
>