[Gen-art] Re: draft-ietf-regext-epp-quic-09 ietf last call Genart review

"Gould, James" <jgould@verisign.com> Tue, 16 June 2026 12:08 UTC

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From: "Gould, James" <jgould@verisign.com>
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Joel, 

Thank you for the review.  We will add RFC 8446 as a normative reference.  

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On 6/15/26, 5:24 PM, "Joel Halpern via Datatracker" <noreply@ietf.org <mailto:noreply@ietf.org>> wrote:


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Document: draft-ietf-regext-epp-quic
Title: Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) Transport over QUIC
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready with Nits


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Document: draft-ietf-regext-epp-quic-09
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2026-06-15
IETF LC End Date: 2026-06-22
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat


Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard


Major issues: N/A


Minor issues:
I-D Nits notices that section 10.8 refers to RFC 8446 (in an apparently
normative fashion), but 8446 does not appear in the references.


Nits/editorial comments: N/A