[Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-multi-domain-fs-reqs-09

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Fri, 26 August 2016 05:09 UTC

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From: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-multi-domain-fs-reqs-09
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Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-multi-domain-fs-reqs-09.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2016-08-26
IETF LC End Date: 2016-07-06
IESG Telechat date: 2016-09-01

Summary: Ready with issues
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Comment: After my Last Call review I expected to see a new version,
-------- but that hasn't happened yet.


Minor issue:
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"This document provides guidance on the deployment of..."

I understand that the AD suggested the standards track, but the document
reads more like a BCP than a Proposed Standard to me. As I read through the
document, it describes alternatives and differing scenarios.

Nits:
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  ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 1813

This reference was added in the -09 version. I believe it should be
Informative instead of Normative.

  ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 1831 (Obsoleted by RFC 5531)

This needs to be fixed.