Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmm-pmipv6-dlif-04
CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO <cjbc@it.uc3m.es> Sat, 02 November 2019 11:45 UTC
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From: CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO <cjbc@it.uc3m.es>
Date: Sat, 02 Nov 2019 12:44:50 +0100
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To: Ines Robles <mariainesrobles@googlemail.com>
Cc: General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-dmm-pmipv6-dlif.all@ietf.org, ietf@ietf.org, dmm <dmm@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dmm-pmipv6-dlif-04
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Hi Ines, We've just posted a new revision addressing your comments. Thanks, Carlos On Fri, Oct 18, 2019 at 1:21 PM CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO <cjbc@it.uc3m.es> wrote: > Hi Ines, > > Thanks for the review. We'll check with IANA folks about how to add more > details (whether they do it or we do). > > Thanks, > > Carlos > > On Mon, Oct 14, 2019 at 10:21 PM Ines Robles via Datatracker < > noreply@ietf.org> wrote: > >> Reviewer: Ines Robles >> Review result: Ready with Nits >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just >> like any other last call comments. >> >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> >> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-dmm-pmipv6-dlif-04 >> Reviewer: Ines Robles >> Review Date: 2019-10-14 >> IETF LC End Date: 2019-10-14 >> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat >> >> Summary: >> >> I believe the draft is technically good. This document is well written. >> >> The document proposes Distributed Mobility Management for Proxy Mobile >> IPv6 in >> which mobility sessions are anchored at the last IP hop router called MAAR >> (mobility anchor and access router). The document focuses on the required >> extensions to effectively support simultaneously anchoring several flows >> at >> different distributed gateways. >> >> I have a minor concern detailed in Nits section. >> >> Major issues:Not Issues found >> >> Minor issues: Not Issues found >> >> Nits/editorial comments: >> >> It would be nice to specify IANA Section with more details, such as >> indicating >> the registry which the option type belong, etc. [rfc8126] >> >> Thank you for this document, >> >> Ines. >> >> >> > > -- > Special Issue "Beyond 5G Evolution": > https://www.mdpi.com/journal/electronics/special_issues/beyond_5g > > -- Special Issue "Beyond 5G Evolution": https://www.mdpi.com/journal/electronics/special_issues/beyond_5g
- [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-d… Ines Robles via Datatracker
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO
- Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ie… Alissa Cooper