[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-sidrops-rpki-rsc-10

Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 24 August 2022 09:18 UTC

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Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-sidrops-rpki-rsc-10
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2022-08-24
IETF LC End Date: 2022-08-24
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:A well written document ready for publication

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: I did spend a bunch of time agonising over whether the
term checklist was used in the normal meaning of the term and in the end
concluded that it was, but a sentence somewhere setting the reader at ease
would be useful.