Re: [Gen-art] Resolution on comments of draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree-10

Ben,

Thanks for your confirmation. Yes, it is still unsubmitted.
We plan to post the new version this week.

Cheers,
Yuanlong

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Ben Campbell [mailto:ben@nostrum.com]
> Sent: Tuesday, December 15, 2015 6:48 AM
> To: Jiangyuanlong
> Cc: Russ Housley; Stephen Farrell; Jari Arkko; Sheng Jiang; Barry Leiba; Alvaro
> Retana; Stewart Bryant; draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree.all@ietf.org; IETF Gen-ART;
> The IESG; BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A
> Subject: Re: Resolution on comments of draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree-10
> 
> Hi,
> 
> This (I assume still unsubmitted) version addresses my IESG ballot
> comments.
> 
> Thanks!
> 
> Ben.
> 
> On 11 Dec 2015, at 5:16, Jiangyuanlong wrote:
> 
> > Hi all,
> >
> > Thanks a lot for your reviews.
> > Based on all the comments received during the IESG evaluation, we have
> > prepared a tentative version 11 for this draft.
> > We believe all the comments are resolved, but please check whether you
> > have any concerns with the texts in this version.
> >
> > If there are no further comments, we will upload it as the formal
> > revision 11 version.
> >
> > Best regards,
> > Yuanlong
> >
> >> -----Original Message-----
> >> From: BRUNGARD, DEBORAH A [mailto:db3546@att.com]
> >> Sent: Thursday, December 03, 2015 11:03 PM
> >> To: Jari Arkko
> >> Cc: Jiangyuanlong; Russ Housley;
> >> draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree.all@ietf.org; IETF
> >> Gen-ART; IETF
> >> Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Review of
> >> draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree-10
> >>
> >> Hi Jari,
> >>
> >> Yes, we'll be doing a new revision for addressing other comments.
> >>
> >> I've asked for today's telechat if no discusses to mark it as
> >> approved, revised
> >> draft needed.
> >>
> >> Much thanks Russ for your review!
> >>
> >> Deborah
> >>
> >>
> >> Sent from my iPhone
> >>
> >>> On Dec 3, 2015, at 1:08 PM, Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> wrote:
> >>>
> >>> Many thanks for your detailed review, Russ!
> >>>
> >>> Yuanlong, will there be a new draft version or other edits before
> >>> the draft
> >>> is approved?
> >>>
> >>> Jari
> >>>
> >>>> On 17 Nov 2015, at 00:53, Jiangyuanlong <jiangyuanlong@huawei.com>
> >> wrote:
> >>>>
> >>>> Russ,
> >>>>
> >>>> Thanks a lot for your review and good observations.
> >>>> Please see my comments in line.
> >>>>
> >>>> Best regards,
> >>>> Yuanlong
> >>>>
> >>>>> -----Original Message-----
> >>>>> From: Russ Housley [mailto:housley@vigilsec.com]
> >>>>> Sent: Saturday, November 14, 2015 1:28 AM
> >>>>> To: draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree.all@ietf.org
> >>>>> Cc: IETF Gen-ART; IETF
> >>>>> Subject: Gen-ART Review of draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree-10
> >>>>>
> >>>>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General
> >>>>> Area Review
> >>>>> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the
> >>>>> IESG for
> >>>>> the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document
> >>>>> shepherd or AD
> >>>>> before posting a new version of the draft.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> For more information, please see the FAQ at
> >>>>> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Document: draft-ietf-l2vpn-vpls-pe-etree-10
> >>>>> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> >>>>> Review Date: 2015-11-13
> >>>>> IETF LC End Date: 2015-11-24
> >>>>> IESG Telechat date: unknown
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Summary:  Almost Ready
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Major Concerns: None
> >>>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Minor Concerns:
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Sections 4.1 and 5.3.1 inclues a reference to [802.1Q-2011].
> >>>>> Should this be
> >>>>> the 2014 version of the document?  If not, please add the
> >>>>> informative
> >>>>> reference for [802.1Q-2011].
> >>>> [YJ] Yes, all these should refer to [802.1Q-2014].
> >>>>
> >>>>>
> >>>>> Other Editorial Comments:
> >>>>>
> >>>>> The Abstract should appear on the title page.
> >>>> [YJ] OK.
> >>>>
> >>>>> Section 3 needs a reference for MEF 6.1:
> >>>>> s/Specification MEF 6.1/Specification MEF 6.1 [MEF6.1]/ Also,
> >>>>> [MEF6.1]
> >>>>> needs to be added as a normative reference.
> >>>> [YJ] All these will be updated to MEF 6.2.
> >>>>
> >>>>> Section 3 needs a reference for IEEE 802.1Q-2003:
> >>>>> s/B.1.3 of IEEE 802.1Q-2003/B.1.3 of IEEE 802.1Q-2003
> >>>>> [802.1Q-2003]/ Also,
> >>>>> please add an informative reference for [802.1Q-2003].
> >>>> [YJ] Yes, we will add an informative reference for [802.1Q-2003].
> >>>>
> >>>>> Third level section headings do not have space between the section
> >>>>> number
> >>>>> and the section title.  For example:
> >>>>> s/5.3.1.PW Processing/5.3.1. PW Processing/
> >>>> [YJ] OK.
> >>>>
> >>>>> In Fig 4, there is room to shift the figure to the right, this
> >>>>> will allow the "AC"
> >>>>> labels to fit better on the left:
> >>>>>
> >>>>>          +----------------------------------------+
> >>>>>          |           VPLS-capable PE model        |
> >>>>>          |   +---------------+          +------+  |
> >>>>>          |   |               |==========|TVSI-1|------------
> >>>>> +---+  AC  |   |               ------------      |------------ PWs
> >>>>> |CE |----------|     Bridge    ------------      |------------
> >>>>> +---+      |   |               | Root &   +------+  |
> >>>>>          |   |     Module    | Leaf VLAN   o      |
> >>>>>          |   |               |             o      |
> >>>>>          |   |               |             o      |
> >>>>>          |   |               |             o      |
> >>>>>          |   |               |             o      |
> >>>>> +---+  AC  |   |               |   VLAN-n +------+  |
> >>>>> |CE |----------|               ------------VSI-n |-------------
> >>>>> +---+      |   |               |==========|      |-------------
> >>>>> PWs
> >>>>>          |   |               |     ^    |      |-------------
> >>>>>          |   +---------------+     |    +------+  |
> >>>>>          |                         |              |
> >>>>>          +-------------------------|--------------+
> >>>>>                        LAN emulation Interface
> >>>>>
> >>>>>      Figure 4  A VPLS PE Model for E-Tree with a Single T-VSI
> >>>>
> >>>>
> >>>> [YJ] OK.
> >>>>
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