[Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-httpbis-legally-restricted-status-04

"Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Tue, 24 November 2015 19:28 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-httpbis-legally-restricted-status-04
     An HTTP Status Code to Report Legal Obstacles
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 24-November-2015
IETF LC End Date: 4- December-2015
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
     In the introduction, would it be more accurate to say that this is 
for use when the server operator has received and is complying with a 
legal demand ...?