Re: [Gen-art] [Gen-Art] GEN-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology-08.txt
"Susan Hares" <shares@ndzh.com> Wed, 15 November 2017 06:32 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [Gen-Art] GEN-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology-08.txt
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Paul: The I2RS WG appreciated your comments on January 13, 2017. Your questions and others lead to revisions. On your minor points: 1) unnumbered - is a term commonly used in the configuration of routers. The authors and WG felt a change to something else would confuse those used to configuring routers. 2) The example for ISIS in Section 6.2 (from version 8) was removed to reduce the amount of detail The nit "augments general network" was not caught by version 12. The change will be caught in version 13. Old:/augments general network topology model/ to New:/augments the general network topology model/ Susan Hares Document shepherd
- Re: [Gen-art] [Gen-Art] GEN-ART Last Call review … Susan Hares
- Re: [Gen-art] [Gen-Art] GEN-ART Last Call review … Paul Kyzivat