Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format-08

Sara Dickinson <sara@sinodun.com> Wed, 21 November 2018 15:13 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format-08
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Thanks for catching these - will fix.

> On 21 Nov 2018, at 01:21, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>; wrote:
> 
> Meral, thanks for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot.
> 
> Alissa
> 
>> On Nov 13, 2018, at 7:22 PM, Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com <mailto:meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>> wrote:
>> 
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
>>  
>> For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>>;.
>>  
>> Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-capture-format-08
>> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
>> Review Date: 2018-11-13
>> IETF LC End Date: 2018-11-13
>> IESG Telechat date: 2018-11-21
>>  
>>  
>> Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments.
>> Major issues:
>> Minor issues:
>>  
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>> -[Page 21], last row in Table, "types are are omitted"----->"types are omitted"
>> -[Page 21], last row in Table,  "If the data type is are omitted"----->"If the data type is omitted"
>>  
>> -[Page 22], Section 7.5, "collection and and"---->"collection and"
>> -[Page 37], "may have be split"---->"may have been split"
>> -[Page 37], "may have be sent"---->"may have been sent"
>>  
>> -[Page 38], "choronological"--->"chronological"
>> -[Page 63], "schema to to read"---->"schema to read"
>>  
>> Best Regards,
>> Meral
>> ---
>> Meral Shirazipour
>> Ericsson Research
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