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Re: [Gen-art] [Gen-Art] GEN-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology-08.txt

Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> Wed, 15 November 2017 18:22 UTC

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From: Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [Gen-Art] GEN-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l3-topology-08.txt
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Susan,

Thanks for your attention to these.

	Thanks,
	Paul

On 11/15/17 1:31 AM, Susan Hares wrote:
> Paul:
> 
> The I2RS WG appreciated your comments on January 13, 2017.  Your 
> questions and others lead to revisions.
> 
> On your minor points:
> 
> 1)unnumbered – is a term commonly used in the configuration of routers.  
> The authors and WG felt a change to something else would confuse those 
> used to configuring routers.
> 
> 2)The example for ISIS in Section 6.2 (from version 8) was removed to 
> reduce the amount of detail
> 
> The nit “augments general network” was not caught by version 12.   The 
> change will be caught in version 13.
> 
> Old:/augments general network topology model/ to
> 
> New:/augments the general network topology model/
> 
> Susan Hares
> 
> Document shepherd
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