[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-cdni-uri-signing-21

Christer Holmberg via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 19 February 2021 21:39 UTC

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Reviewer: Christer Holmberg
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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Document: draft-ietf-cdni-uri-signing-21
Reviewer: Christer Holmberg
Review Date: 2021-02-19
IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-19
IESG Telechat date: 2021-02-25

Summary: The document is ready for publication. A very minor comment is that I
do think that some of the paragraphs were quite long a detailed, and could
perhaps have been split into separate paragraphs in order to make the text more
clear.

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues: N/A

Nits/editorial comments: N/A