[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-adslmib-gbond-atm-mib-05

Pete McCann <mccap@petoni.org> Wed, 14 March 2012 00:38 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-adslmib-gbond-atm-mib-05
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft.
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Document: draft-ietf-adslmib-gbond-atm-mib-05
Reviewer: Pete McCann
Review Date: March 13, 2012
IETF LC End Date:
IESG Telechat date: March 15, 2012

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

Abstract:
  This document defines Management Information Base (MIB) module
SHOULD BE:
  This document defines a Management Information Base (MIB) module

smilint complains:

mibs/GBOND-ATM-MIB:31: [2] {module-identity-registration} illegal module
identity registration

I'm not quite sure what this is about or whether it will be fixed after the
RFC Editor updates the MIB with the requested changes.