Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-radext-radius-fragmentation-09
Alejandro Perez Mendez <alex@um.es> Wed, 07 January 2015 08:31 UTC
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Hi Benoit, sure, we will provide an updated version in a few days. Regards, Alejandro El 05/01/15 a las 11:13, Benoit Claise escribió: > Dear draft-ietf-radext-radius-fragmentation authors, > > Can you please address the GEN-ART review. > > Regards, Benoit >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on >> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at >> http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. >> >> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments >> you may receive. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-radext-radius-fragmentation-09 >> >> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour >> >> Review Date: 2014-12-25 >> >> IETF LC End Date: 2014-12-25 >> >> IESG Telechat date: NA >> >> Summary: >> >> This draft is ready to be published as Experimental RFC but I have >> some comments. >> >> Minor issues: >> >> -Not sure about this, [page 1] says Updates: 2865, 6158, 6929 (if >> approved). Can an experimental RFC update non-experimental RFCs? >> >> I read the note in Section 12.1. Just raising the question. >> >> Nits/editorial comments: >> >> -[Page 4], Intro, it would be good to remind the reader on why the >> 4096 octet limit was put in place initially and what has changed since. >> >> -[Page 4], Section 1, "limitation mean that"--->"limitation means that" >> >> -[Page 4], "this approach does entirely solve"---> should it be "does >> not" ? >> >> -[Page 5], "the set up"--->"the setup" >> >> -[Page 5], "to implement the draft"--->"to implement the RFC" >> >> -[Page 6], "NOT be used to exchange more than 100K of data", not >> clear what 100K is here? bytes? why? >> >> -[Page 7], "more than 4K of data", as above, not clear what 4K is? >> >> -[Page 9], "the RADIUS and COA"-->"CoA" instead of "COA" >> >> -[Page 14],"other then Additional-Authorization."--->"other than ..." >> >> -[Page 14],"CompliantRADIUS Chlient"-->"...client" >> >> -[Page 14],"if tey had"--->"if they had" >> >> -[Page 27], "into a even"--->"into an even" >> >> -Other: >> >> * Not sure if this RFC should reference to >> draft-ietf-radext-bigger-packets as another alternative to look for? >> >> * Please spell at first use: EAP, NAS, PKI, SAML,ABFAB >> >> *chunk/chunking, would it be better to use >> fragment/fragmenting/fragmentation instead ? or mention the two terms >> are used interchangeably. >> >> Best Regards, >> >> Meral >> >> --- >> >> Meral Shirazipour >> >> Ericsson >> >> Research >> >> www.ericsson.com >> >
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-… Meral Shirazipour
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Benoit Claise
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Alejandro Perez Mendez
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Alejandro Perez Mendez
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Meral Shirazipour