Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-lsp-setup-type-08

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Tue, 03 April 2018 18:49 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-lsp-setup-type-08
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Roni, thanks for your reviews. Jonathan, thanks for your response. I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Mar 2, 2018, at 12:15 PM, Jonathan Hardwick <Jonathan.Hardwick@metaswitch.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi Roni
> 
> Many thanks for the review.  You are right, in this case we meant "IETF Review".  I will update the document.
> 
> Cheers
> Jon
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Roni Even [mailto:ron.even.tlv@gmail.com] 
> Sent: 26 February 2018 14:55
> To: gen-art@ietf.org
> Cc: pce@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org; draft-ietf-pce-lsp-setup-type.all@ietf.org
> Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-pce-lsp-setup-type-08
> 
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review result: Almost Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-pce-lsp-setup-type-??
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date: 2018-02-26
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-03-06
> IESG Telechat date: 2018-04-05
> 
> Summary:
> The document is almost ready for publication as standard track RFC Major issues:
> 
> Minor issues:
> 1. in section 7.2 "The allocation policy for this new registry  should be by IETF Consensus" why not use one of RFC8126 well known policies?
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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