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From: Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net>
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Matt,

Many thanks for this.

Authors, did you have any responses on Matt=92s comments?

Also, Matt, I had one question for you:

>=20
> * The IANA registries this document establishes are not defined.
> One can deduce the required information and its format, but there
> is no guidance on review process (for example). I urge the authors
> to consult RFC 5226 when revisiting the IANA considerations.

What did you have in mind here? At least the -26 specifies Specification
Required for the registries, and given RFC 5226=92s guidance on what =
that
means, I=92m not sure what information is missing. Unless, of course, =
you
think that there should further expert review guidance. Or is the =
problem
that the allocation policy is in the table, not in the text, e.g.:

> 13.6.  DLEP Extensions Registrations
>=20
>=20
>   Upon approval of this document, IANA is requested to create a new
>   DLEP registry, named "Extension Type Values".
>=20
>   The following table provides initial registry values and the
>   [RFC5226] defined policies that should apply to the registry:
>=20
>               +--------------+----------------------------+
>               | Code         | Description/Policy         |
>               +--------------+----------------------------+
>               | 0            | Reserved                   |
>               | 1            | Credit Windowing [CREDIT]  |
>               | 2-65519      | Specification Required     |
>               | 65520-65534  | Private Use                |
>               | 65535        | Reserved                   |
>               +--------------+----------------------------+
>=20
>                       Table 3: DLEP Extension types
>=20
>=20


Jari


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