[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-git-using-github-04

Brian Carpenter via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 24 February 2020 01:01 UTC

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Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review result: Ready with Issues

Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-git-using-github-04

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Document: draft-ietf-git-using-github-04.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2020-02-24
IETF LC End Date: 2020-03-03
IESG Telechat date:  

Summary: Ready with issue
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Comment:
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I've tracked this document since the -00 version and I think it is clear
and represents WG consensus.

Issues:
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Is this draft intended to become part of BCP25? I think it would be
useful for the IESG to clarify this rather than leave it to the RFC Editor.

Nit:
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> 3.4.  Document Formats
>
>   In addition to the canonical XML format [RFC7991], document editors
>   might choose to use a different input form for editing documents,
>   such as Markdown.  Markdown-based formats are more accessible for new
>   contributors, though ultimately decisions about format is left to
>   document editors.

s/is/are/