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Re: [Gen-art] [alto] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-17

kaigao@scu.edu.cn Mon, 30 August 2021 16:26 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [alto] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-17
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Hi Suresh,

Thanks for the comment. We will add IPv6 examples in Section 8 in the next revision as soon as possible.

Best,
Kai

&quot;Suresh Krishnan via Datatracker&quot; &lt;noreply@ietf.org&gt;wrote:
> Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
> Review result: Ready with Nits
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-??
> Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
> Review Date: 2021-08-30
> IETF LC End Date: 2021-08-25
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary:
> 
> Overall, the document is well done and easy to read for someone with a
> background in past work done at alto.
> 
> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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> Please add some IPv6 examples in Section 8.
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